"Dowling suggests in her novel that women who worked are especially affected by this dependency especially during the 80s and in previous years."
So if a woman worked, then in the 80s (and previous years) she was likely especially affected by this dependency? As it is stated, that is what the sentence means, which I would bet is not what was originally intended.
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"Dowling suggests in her novel that women who worked are especially affected by this dependency especially during the 80s and in previous years."
So if a woman worked, then in the 80s (and previous years) she was likely especially affected by this dependency? As it is stated, that is what the sentence means, which I would bet is not what was originally intended.
Maybe a man was needed to edit. >.>
May 25, 2010 - 8:39amThis Comment
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